Poetic complications.

I think I may start posting some of my poems on here. Since this is a creative writing blog and such. And, because I can. I would love to know what people thought of them. So here is my first offering.

First Love

Flying.

Trees flash by in a blur.

The moon rises high,

my hair writhing in the wind.

Beneath my hand,

flexing bundles of muscle,

stained with chestnut softness,

son of the wind.

Sire of a noble lineage,

kindhearted, brave,

gentleman to the last breath,

a faithful companion

to friends of the wind.

With majestic power

he races,

against time, a time traveler,

unstoppable force

for the good of humanity.

A humble abode

for a noble friend,

raw planks guided

by wise carpenter's hand,

a mattress of straw

for the prince of nature.

Handsome and bold,

black, curly locks,

a star glimmers softly,

brother of the night sky,

marking goodness.

His brethren are like him,

possessing grace and finesse,

preferring to spend days

contentedly, blissfully,

rolling fields of grain,

shady relaxation,

splash of minerals. 

Gaze into his eyes,

those compassionate, knowing eyes.

Release thoughts and mind

to the protective warmth

of shimmering, heaving chest. 

I lost myself long ago

in the power of those eyes,

became a sister of the clan,

to a quality so alluring,

charming,

futile resistance impossible.

Now I ride,

a goddess in the sky,

with my steed, no boundaries stand,

a thief upon the wind. 

Eh, let me know what you think. It really would be interesting. I'll write a new post once I wake up and my creative juices are flowing.